rate my team

could some one please rate this team for me. i haven't caught them yet so i have no natures etc. for you.

1. Dragonite.
Outrage
Brick break
Iron tail
Ice beam

2. Arcanine
Fire Blast
Solar Beam
Extreme Speed
Sunny Day

3. Snorlax
Curse
Rest
Rollout
Hyper Beam

4. Electivire
Thunder
Thunder Punch
Screech
Rain Dance

5. Poliwrath
Dynamic Punch
Mind Reader
Hydro Pump
Earthquake

6. Mamoswine
Hail
Ice Fang
Earthquake
Takedown


constructive critism will be much appreciated (as well as complements )

Good Team

If it was me I'd teach Dragonite Dragon Dance for some extra speed and fire power but apart from that everyhting seems solid.

i was thinking of changing outrage to another move, prob dragon breath or dragon rage.

Havn't thought about move sets yet but my list of mon so far are:

Flygon
Gyarados
Electivire
Tyranitar
Garchomp
Dragonite/Salamance

i would take some of the dragon types off if possible (a good ice type and 3 of your pokemon are goners). however gyarados and electivire are good pokemon if trained well and have good movesets.


i would prob take the 3 dragons off as gyarados can learn dragon moves leaving me with gyarados, electivire and tyranitar. i would then choose my next 3 mons to cover their backs.

Flygon stays no matter what

It's not really for my main battles its more just a team to use in the game.

oh right, i thought it was a competitive team. its not that bad then if its just in game.

Nha the first 4 are competitive but the last two places probably be something like Snorlax for the HP and maybe Nidoking for the brute force, lol. Just sticking to my favs really.

very good but as ssomeone has already said give dragonite dragon dance

Dragon Dance is the best move to give any Dragon.

My Flyogn's Moveset so far is:

Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Dragon Dance
Toxic

Not the best but it works.
I'm also replacing Salamance with Rhyperior as it is just amazing and I forgot all about it.

You guys mind rating my team prolly sux like but here goes:

Dragonite:

Earthquake
Ice beam
Hyper Beam
Outrage


Gengar:

Psychic
Shadow Ball
Destiny Bond
Dark Pulse


Emploeon:

Blizzard
Hydro pump
Surf
Waterfall


Heatran:

Flamethrower
Lava Plume
Earth Power
Iron Head


Roserade:

Energy Ball
Petal Dance
SolarBeam
Cut


Zapdos:

Thunderwave
Aerial Ace
Thunder
Drill Peck

...

Torterra (Grass and Ground)-
Leaf Storm
Frenzy Plant
Razor Leaf
Earthquake

Dialga (Steel and Dragon)-
Roar of Time
Fire Blast
Dragon Claw
Flash Cannon

Pachirisu (Electric)-
Discharge
Super Fang
Thunder
Cut

Machoke (Fighting)-
Cross Chop
Rock Smash
Focus Punch
DynamicPunch

Gardevoir (Psychic)-
Energy Ball
Magical Leaf
Psychic
Future Sight

Crobat (Flying and Poison)-
Fly
Air Slash
Aerial Ace
Mean Look

could some one help me with this, i've edited my team and found i have no special sweepers, and my mixed sweeper isn't built for sp attack.

Dragonite - Dragonscale
Adamant EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6HP
Outrage
Dragon Dance
Brick Break
Iron Tail
Physical Sweeper

Arcanine - charcoal
Naughty EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6HP
FlareBlitz
SunnyDay
Solar Beam
Extreme Speed
Physical Sweeper

Blissey - Leftovers
Bold EV's: 252 Defence, 252 Sp. Defence, 6hp
Softboiled
Toxic
Grassknot
Psychic
Tank

Electivire - Magnet
Rash EV's: 128 Attack, 128 Sp. Attack, 252 Speed
Thunder
Thunder Punch
Discharge
Rain Dance
Mixed Sweeper

Poliwrath - Mystic Water
Rash EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6HP
Surf
Dynamic Punch
Earthquake
Body Slam
Physical Sweeper

Mamoswine
Adamant EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP
IceFang
Avalanche
Earthquake
Takedown
Physical Sweeper

Dragonite, Arcanine and Blissey are NOT coming off my team, although i would be willing to change there move set apart from Dragonites.

I would like to keep Electivire and Mamoswine, but i would get rid of them if i had to. Poliwrath can come off no problem.

so can some help me and recommend new movesets, pokemon and EV's, please.

Banana wrote:

Arcanine wrote:

could some one help me with this, i've edited my team and found i have no special sweepers, and my mixed sweeper isn't built for sp attack.

Dragonite - Dragonscale
Adamant EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6HP
Outrage
Dragon Dance
Brick Break
Iron Tail
Physical Sweeper


Give him a lum berry. Iron tail is a nono. A punch is a better option. Also, I'd suggest EQ over brick break, but it's whether you need to break light screens.


Arcanine - charcoal NUUUU MUSCLE BAND. Never use single-type items
Naughty you want Jolly EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6HP
FlareBlitz
SunnyDay
Solar Beam
Extreme Speed
Physical Sweeper

Did you listen? ARCANINE. DOES. NOT. SUNNYBEAM!!! physical sweeper with sunny beam. Fire's cant take hits. You dont want a 2 turn non STAB move on an arcanine ¬_¬ Go for thunderfang and crunch >_>


Blissey - Leftovers
Bold EV's: 252 Defence, 252 Sp. Defence, 6hp
Softboiled
Toxic
Grassknot
Psychic
Tank


Thats not a tank, thats a tank with sweeper moves and phailing EVs >_> You want to go for: 252 defence, 148 HP, the rest in sp. atk or speed. For the moves, go for seismic toss somewhere.

Electivire - Magnet ARGH, No, you want a life orb/expert belt
Rash EV's: 128 Attack, 128 Sp. Attack, 252 Speed
Thunder
Thunder Punch
Discharge
Rain Dance
Mixed Sweeper

You wont want 'Vire as a mixed sweeper, it doesnt work. Again, conflicting weather, and a weed using a 2 turn set up which is pwnt to hell by a ground, it can't do squat with 3 freaking thunder moves!!!!! ¬_¬ read my last post


Poliwrath - Mystic Water
Rash PHYSICAL sweeper, with a +SPATK nature!?!?!?! EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6HP
Surf
Dynamic Punch
Earthquake
Body Slam
Physical Sweeper

A physical sweeper.......with SURF???!!?? Go for waterfall, and dynamic punch should be replaced IMO.

Mamoswine
Adamant EV's: 252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP
IceFang
Avalanche
Earthquake
Takedown
Physical Sweeper

2 ice moves.....and neither is ice shard. Use ice shard over avalanche. Take down is stupid, recoil and less power than return, and never super effective. IMO replace it with something else, but if you want normal go for return.

Dragonite, Arcanine and Blissey are NOT coming off my team, although i would be willing to change there move set apart from Dragonites.

I would like to keep Electivire and Mamoswine, but i would get rid of them if i had to. Poliwrath can come off no problem.

so can some help me and recommend new movesets, pokemon and EV's, please.

you really didn't help me that much, i asked to recommend other pokemon for my team as, if you read my post, i have no special sweepers.

EDIT: No need anymore, i have a new team, i'll post later when i have movestes etc.

Arcanine wrote:

so can some help me and recommend new movesets, pokemon and EV's, please.

I did 2/3 of what you asked actually arcanine.

like i found out, choose your team members yourself, otherwise it wont be your team, it'll be bananas. Work with pokemon you know, it helps a lot.

also, play with your favourites, not what you think works. The amount of noobs going

"el oh el i gotz scarfed garchomp and salamence and gyarados, zomg you killed mah pogeymanz with yours"

because i have electric and ice moves and the ability to kill dragons and gyaradoses is unbelievable. People die to my BLs and my UUs all the time, its predictability, each garchomp will have outrage, EQ and probably fire fang. Each mence will have EQ and D-Claw, and each gyarados will have waterfall and EQ.


be original. and consider my advice cos your movesets are kinda bad xD

Banana wrote:

also, play with your favourites, not what you think works. The amount of noobs going

"el oh el i gotz scarfed garchomp and salamence and gyarados, zomg you killed mah pogeymanz with yours"

because i have electric and ice moves and the ability to kill dragons and gyaradoses is unbelievable. People die to my BLs and my UUs all the time, its predictability, each garchomp will have outrage, EQ and probably fire fang. Each mence will have EQ and D-Claw, and each gyarados will have waterfall and EQ.


be original. and consider my advice cos your movesets are kinda bad xD

i've gotten rid of electivire, poliwrath and mamoswine, and replaced them with Primeape, Starmie and Skarmary, i've listened to you and given Dragonite EQ and thunderpunch over iron tail and brick break, and gave him DD ovre ice beam, Changed Blissey's move set to a special wall moveset, and i really went against what you said and completely changed arcanine into a Special Sweeper (I know he has beter attack than Special attack, but it is so little it doesn't make much difference, and i read a team building guide and it said it could be used as both so. I was gonna take your advice but i needed a special sweeper and that was the easiest option (and i got my favourite move in the game on my favourite pokemon in the game, score)).

Thats fine arcy, it'll be a surprise to people anyway, as everyone'll expect a physical arcanine. Just as long as you didn't make it a sunnybeamer >_>

but good, personalisation [within the realms of what works and what doesn't] is the key to success