rate my team

Arcanine wrote:

could some one please rate this team for me. i haven't caught them yet so i have no natures etc. for you.

1. Dragonite
Adament
EV's: 252 speed / 252 attack
Outrage
Brick break
Dragon Dance
Safeguard

2. Arcanine
Fire Blast
Solar Beam
Extreme Speed
Sunny Day
^No idea, sorry.

3. Snorlax @ Leftovers
Careful
EV's: 252 HP / 252 Sp.Def
Curse
Rest
Body Slam
Crunch

4. Electivire @ Expert Belt
EV's: 252 Attack / 252 Speed
Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
Cross Chop
EarthQuake

5. Poliwrath
Dynamic Punch
Mind Reader
Hydro Pump
Earthquake
^No idea, sorry.

6. Mamoswine
EarthQuake
Avalanche
Stone Edge
Curse

constructive critism will be much appreciated (as well as complements )

See bolded parts. ^___^

Woah, there's a lot of tough competitors here. Well, here's one team I'm working on.

Pride (Metagross) Wide Lens
Adamant/Somewhat stubborn

Meteor Mash
Remeniscient Headbutt
Earthquake
Magnet Rise

His speed is actually one of his best stats, allowing him to outrun a lot of Pokemon you wouldn't expect, such as Dragonite, Tyranitar and Milotic.

Claire (Dragonite) Quick Claw
Careful/A little quick tempered

Dragon Rush
Fire Punch
Steel Wing
Fly

The Quick Claw works pretty often and her Dragon Rush hits alot from the test period with my 'Itemosis' theory. She can survive Ice Beam from some Pokemon, but not a lot.

Halibel (Garchomp) Life Orb
Careful/Somewhat stubborn

Dragon Claw
Fire Fang
Earthquake
Iron Head

Since she's fast, has a high attack stat and two moves that can take them down pretty quick along with the power she augments with the Life Orb, I actually send her up against Ice-types. Her special defense is almost through the roof, letting her survive Ice Beam at face value.

Aisuhime (Glaceon) Nevermeltice

Water Pulse
Hail
Mirror Coat
Ice Beam

One of the best Pokemon I've ever bred, she can give my Pride a run for her money! Water Pulse to obliterate Fire and Rock types with her awesome special attack, STAB Ice Beam and Mirror Coat for the special attacks sure sure to encounter and endure.

Data Drain (Porygon-Z) Wise Glasses
Bold/Highly curious

Psychic
Tri-Attack
Signal Beam
Thunderbolt

Thunderbolt to take down a lot of Pokemon that might be faster than it (not likely), causing paralysis, Psychic for Fighting types, Signal Beam for...I dunno and Tri-Attack for STAB and causing burn or freezing.

Ryuusei (Togekiss) King's Rock
Modest/Alert to sounds

Pulse Bomb
Shock Wave
Air Slash
Magical Leaf

Pulse Bomb for Ice and Rock types, Shock Wave just for accuracy, Magical Leaf for other Rock types and Air Slash...I'll tell you guys a secret.

Since Air Slash has a 30% chance of flinching, it's pretty good by itself. But my Ryuusei has Serene Grace, doubling it to 60%. Add King's Rock and it boosts it by 20% more. Air Slash will now cause flinching 80% OF THE TIME.

@Gunpou Star, do you know what EV's are?, since if you don't battling competitively is going to be a struggle. If the answer is no then read this guide (really do read all of it)

http://www.officialnintendomagazine.co.uk/forums/viewtopic.php?t=11811&start=0

quick claw, kings rock and possibly wide lens? are all classed as HAX items and are generally banned within the metagame

KC14 wrote:

quick claw, kings rock and possibly wide lens? are all classed as HAX items and are generally banned within the metagame

Wide lens isn't a hax item i don't think.

Silver light wrote:

KC14 wrote:

quick claw, kings rock and possibly wide lens? are all classed as HAX items and are generally banned within the metagame

Wide lens isn't a hax item i don't think.

nah, its not, if it is, there's alot of people breaking rules....

Arcanine wrote:

Silver light wrote:

KC14 wrote:

quick claw, kings rock and possibly wide lens? are all classed as HAX items and are generally banned within the metagame

Wide lens isn't a hax item i don't think.

nah, its not, if it is, there's alot of people breaking rules....

Of course they're not hacked. It's just really easy to get those items. Unlike the Life Orbs and Leftovers people seem to grow overnight. Anyway, I've got a team in the works and I wanna know what you guys think of these three so far.

Pride (Metagross) @ Wide Lens
Adamant/Somewhat tubborn

Meteor Mash
Zen Headbutt
Magnet Rise
Earthquake

HP: 296
Attack: 352
Defense: 292
Special Attack: 178
Special Defense: 239
Speed: 192

Ka Boom Bu (Magmortar) @ Magnet
Modest/Capable of taking hits

Solarbeam
Confuse Ray
Flamethrower
Thunderbolt

HP: 285
Attack: 212
Defense: 195
Special Attack: 311
Special Defense: 225
Speed: 205

Crystal (Tyranitar) @ Sky Plate
Impish/Proud of its power

Rock Slide
Crunch
Brick Break
Aerial Ace

HP: 333
Attack: 328
Defense: 299
Special Attack: 202
Special Defense: 257
Speed: 155

Last, I want to know what advice you guys have to offer concerning Rhyperior. I want it to be Careful, have a characteristic that boosts attack and train in for special defense and speed. Thanks in advance.

BTW, the three Pokemon above are all Lv. 100.

haxx doesnt mean hacked, it means they edit luck aspects in the game in your favour